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What is a good way to ensure that your scholarship essay/form/answer gets considered?

I want to be prepared for when I begin applying for scholarships and such as I am in high school now. #scholarships #college-essay

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Aleksandra’s Answer

Hi Nada,

My advice is to just focus on answering the question.
You write a lot of essays every school year, so you know how to write. Don't over-complicate things. Where I have seen students miss their opportunity is when they don't answer the question at all or don't answer it fully.

For example, if a question asks you: Tell us about an experience that shaped your life. The real sub-questions are: What is the experience (explain)? How did it shape your life (explain)? Tell us why this is important for our school or foundation (why does it matter)?

The second key part is to make sure you pick and write something you are passionate about. It shouldn't be a topic you are dreading. Passion comes through in writing.

As long as you answer a question fully and passionately, you are well positioned.
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Pradeep’s Answer

Make sure your essay fits the theme.


Let's say that you are applying for an award based on community service. In the application, you list all of the community service groups that you belong to and service project awards that you've won. But in the essay you vent about your disgust for the homeless and how they should find jobs instead of blocking your passage on sidewalks. Your essay may be brilliantly conceived and written, but if its message is not in line with the rest of your application, it will create a conflicting message and keep you out of the winners' bracket.


So how do you know what the theme of your essay should be? The answer is actually quite simple and goes back to why you decided to apply for the scholarship in the first place:


The theme of your essay is almost always determined by the purpose of the award or why the organization is giving away the money.


Once you know this, you can choose which aspect of your life to highlight in the essay.


Answer the underlying question.


Have you ever been asked one question but felt there was an underlying question that was really being asked? Maybe your mom asked you something like, "Tell me about your new friend Karen." But what she really was asking is, "Tell me about your new friend Karen. Are her 12 earrings and tattoo-laden arms a sign that you shouldn't be spending so much time with her?" In most cases, the essay question is just a springboard for you to answer the real question the scholarship judges want addressed. An organization giving an award for students who plan to study business might ask, "Why do you want to study business?" But the underlying question they are asking is, "Why do you want to study business, and why are you the best future business person we should gift with our hard-earned money?"


For every scholarship that you attempt to win, you will be competing with students who share similar backgrounds and goals. If you are applying to an award that supports students who want to become doctors, you can bet that 99% of the students applying also want to become doctors. Therefore, the goal of every scholarship judge is to determine the best applicant out of a pool of applicants who at first glance look very similar. Use the essay question as a way to prove to the scholarship committee that you are the worthiest applicant for the award.


Share a slice of life.


As you are explaining why you deserve to win, it is important that you also reveal something about yourself. Obviously, in the short space of 500 to 1,000 words, you can't cover everything about you. This is why one of the most effective techniques is to share a "slice of your life." In other words, don't try to explain everything. Just focus on one aspect of your life. If you are writing about your involvement in an activity, it may be tempting to summarize your involvement over the years and list numerous accomplishments. However, this would sound more like a resume (which by the way you should include with every application) and it would not tell the judges anything new. However, if you focus on just one aspect of an experience, you could spend some time going below the surface and share something about who you are, which would be far more memorable. In other words, you would be sharing a slice of your life.

Thank you comment icon Thank you for the absolutely amazing advice Pradeep!!! Nada
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